सहज सरल सतत……..
Great........the way and suggestion of just having a feeling and touch of our loved one in such modern and techno-freak style is appreciatable. The rhythm and cadence is to the expectation.The poet is not writing but the situation compelled him to write. On the whole your objectivity is questionable. A poem of your usual style and in the very usual manner it touched me.A Big Hand to You!
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शब्दों के बीच की खामोशी पढ़ी . कविता वहीँ है. बधाई .